My first fanfic.....sorta...

Here was my first fanfic that I did before I really got into the series. I got inspired to do it from the episode of Allen going to the Black Order for the first time. Komui was a riot, so I made this based off of that episode alone.

(Note: I had very little knowledge of the names, so Komui is referred to as "Boss".....and Reever was actually supposed to be that timid guy from the episode that Komui had pushed around....)


Well, here it is:

Reever's Birthday Surprise

Quote :

Reever's Birthday Surprise

*The Boss is excellent at getting his birthday gifts for others, in fact they are some of the most desired compared to everyone elses'.....and at the same time everyone dreads getting the gift. Thats because he always can find the perfect hiding place for it....so perfect that he at times can't seem to find the gifts himself. And so......*


Boss: *in a sing song kind of way* "Happy Birthday to YOU! Happy Birthday to YOU! Happy Birthday Dear REEVER! Happy Birthday To You!"

Reever: *shudders because he knows whats coming up next* "Umm....thank you sir. Are you sure you don't want to sing this with everyone else? I'm sure they'll be back at any --"

Boss: "Nonsense! You know as well as I do that they all busy with their work today, although I must say its odd how work has been piling up so quickly...but in any case. Its time for your birthday gift! Hmm.....now where did I put that...?"

Reever: *cringes*

Boss: "I know! Why don't we play a game of hide and seek! The gift is hidden and you can find it."

Reever: "N-n-no sir....thats quite alright, you don't have to ---"

Boss: "Its quite alright. Afterall, what sort of birthday would be complete without gifts." *Evil glint in his eye* whispers: "I'm also freezing your funds until you find. You'll thank me for this later."

Reever: -Dooom!- (thats supposed to be in the background of him) *slumps shoulders and gets to work looking for his gift to keep his pay and paid vacation times*


-Three hours later-

*Boss hears a loud piercing screech echo through the building. He rushes over to see whats going on. He runs up to the second floor as he sees Reever pointing in a scared way into the newly emptied clothes hamper (or more appropriately named, dumpster as these never seem to get washed since no one goes near it.....with good reason)*

Boss: "Whats with all the screaming?" *looks beyond extended finger to see the rotted corpse of a dog with a note card attatched to it saying: "Happy Birthday Reever!" *

Boss: "Oh...umm....so thats where I put that gift from last year. I was wondering where he had wandered off to."

*Reever is at this point practically twitching from both disgust and fear.*

Boss: *Reaches into shirt pocket and remembers something.* "Oh yeah, I just remembered. Since I had forgotten where I hid your gift last year, I had kept this in my pocket for you and just plum forgot."

Boss: *Pulls out a shiny silver pocket watch with a grand design carved into the door, its metal clasp decoratively designed to look like a butterfly opening and closing its wings. Hands it to Reever.* "You do so well at keeping track of everything that I thought this would help you immensely, as well as be something you would cherish."

Boss: "I had gotten it for you about a month ago when that nice traveling merchant came by. Speaking of which." *sniffs shirt jacket* "This hasn't been put to wash since I bought the watch."

Reever: *Is nearly moved to tears, first by the gesture, then by the realization of why his boss has been putting on and around so much cologne, scented candles, smelling salts, etc.* "Thank you sir. I love it."

Boss: *Tosses jacket into the hamper (it drapes over the dog corpse).* "Would you mind cleaning up this mess? (cuts off Reever before a response) Thank you so much! And remember to be careful with that shirt, its my favorite!"

*The Boss skips away merrily as Reever does an anime fall and nearly has a heart attack because of the event as well as the realization that he's once again stuck cleaning the Boss's mess, dog corpse and all.*

THE END

(( I love how it's about Komui and Reever. xD

Poor dog. ;o; ))

Me: awesome!
komui has...'issues'

....speaking of issues.....just wait until you see my latest story......(I'd post the Lenalee/Allen story I made, but its not PG-13, so if you want to see that one message me)

Lets just say that the latest "Komui" story I made involves him seeing Allen and Lenalee kissing, a giant fireball falling down from the sky, and the ultimate Komourin robot........I'll post it soon....

me: cool...!!
yhue:...

... DD<

(( Both Kaele and I are strong opposers to AllenxLenalee. Me because Lenalee was so damn annoying on the Ark that I never forgave her and Kaele because... ))

EWWW. SHE MUST DIE NAO. >3
SHE IS COMPETITION BETWEEN ME AND MY MY MY ALLEN-POO!

me: yes..she is annoying but i don't hate her... allen said it himself...'one-chan' was it...yes he called her his big sister...ha! that's it!

yhue: ...allen-poo?

(( Well, I don't hate Lenalee. She just gets a little annoying on the ark after she loses the power to control her boots and everyone is dying for her and she just cries and hogs attention. :I ))

Yeah, she's like the annoying older sister. ;D
But I still dun liek her. >C

*whispers to Yhue without Kaele hearing* (( Kaele hasn't seen Allen for awhile, so she's giving him weird suffixes. She always does this. ))

yhue: oh, i see...

Me: yeah...she hogs to much attention, but she gets more attention in the anime....
in the manga, she doesn't get much...

(( Kaele is a little obsessed... ))

Creator!! DD":

(( ... Yeah, I wouldn't know that. xD
I hate reading manga online, and I only do it when there's no way I can buy it. So I've only read up to Vol 14 and seen all the anime. o: ))

....I've seen up to episode 51 of the anime, so I'm working on catching up......

oh, i see...so kaele's creator, you buy manga?
(i've only collected 'til vol. 4 but i read it online...and can't wait til the hiatus is over...)
i've watched it to and have a dvd....

hmmm..i hope for a season 2 real quick...

Oh, Masque! It gets so good. =w=

(( Yeah, I have a ton of manga. o:
Like 9 series, and I have every DGM available. I have part one of the first season in English, and the two Reverse novels. >w<
I need more money so I can buy the seconds part of the first season. D: ))

Creator, you're obsessed too. >:I