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 A Brother's Love - A Komui FanFic

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PostSubject: A Brother's Love - A Komui FanFic   A Brother's Love - A Komui FanFic EmptyFri Jun 05, 2009 10:51 pm

Here is my second story about Komui, only this one is a bit more accurate for how the characters act and such.......

(this was mainly done as practice for action scenes, and I hope it came out okay.)

Please enjoy and let me know what you think.



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A Brother’s Love


Komui skipped up the steps of the spiral staircase, following the GPS tracker he had placed on Lenalee when she was sleeping a few months earlier. He had such great news, he could barely contain himself. He just had to tell her. Komui had just successfully contacted the space satellite he had sent up the week before. He gleefully pranced down the hall and took a turn to head down toward the balcony. Even though he was quite a distance away from her, he could still make out just what she was doing. His jaw dropped as he began to twitch, his eyes growing wide with anger.

“LENALEE!” yelled Komui with all his might as he saw her kissing Allen.

The walls of the castle shook as his screams echoed throughout the building.

“Not again,” sighed Reever as he shook his head, waking up from his nap in the research room, “Come on guys. Let’s go stop Komui before he destroys the place.”

The others looked up at Reever and nodded as they scrambled to their feet so they could search for the rogue Chief.

Allen froze in fear and turned his head toward Komui. He had never seen him quite this angry. Lenalee turned to see her brother’s face red with fury. She had gotten used to his overreactions over the years, but even this startled her.

“Umm, Allen, you might want to run now. I’ll try stalling him,” spoke Lenalee as she started running over to Komui. Meanwhile, Allen was making his way down another hallway.

“Lenalee! How could you?!” shouted Komui loudly when she ran up to him.

Lenalee ran up to Komui and slapped him as she started to say, “Komui! Leave me alone! I’m tired of you hounding me all the time over every little thing! Let me live how I want!”

Komui looked down after being slapped, his face red with her handprint. Tears began to run down his face and drop to the floor as he stood there silently.

“Komui?” said Lenalee softly, realizing that she had actually hurt his feelings.

Komui looked up furiously before shouting, “ALLEN! HOW DARE YOU BRAINWASH MY LENALEE!”

Before Lenalee could react, Komui was already running in the direction Allen was going. Komui continued chasing him around every turn until they were finally on opposite ends of the courtyard.

“Allen. You will pay for your insolence. You will pay…with your LIFE!” yelled Komui loudly.

“K-komui. Calm down. There’s no reason to do anything hasty,” spoke Allen fearfully.

Komui raised up his arm and pushed his sleeve back to reveal a gauntlet-like device on his forearm. He pressed a button on the device, and a surge of orange light came down from the heavens and landed upon it. Allen activated his Cross and prepared himself for anything.

“Komourin S! I Summon Thee! Smite My Enemy!” shouted Komui with a devilish smile as he pointed toward Allen.

Allen looked pale as the clouds turned dark and started swirling around the beam of light. Soon the light stopped as a giant fireball fell down into the middle of the courtyard, filling the air with smoke and dust. As the dust cleared, a mechanical sound echoed through the courtyard, revealing a red and silver, four legged machine casting a towering shadow over Allen. This Komourin was the largest one that Allen had ever seen, its size nearly as large as the castle itself. Komourin’s sensor scanned the area and finally detected Allen. Various mechanized sounds emanated from it as weaponry started emerging from its body, pointed at Allen.

“Komourin! Attack!” shouted Komui as he pressed a button on his wrist device.

The machine charged up its weapons as Allen braced himself, ready to use his Cross Arm as a shield. Komourin fired upon him, with a volley of energy blasts and missiles. Allen dodged what he could, using his Cross Arm to stop anything that wouldn’t miss. The volleys then stopped as a commotion broke out on the opposite end of the courtyard. When Allen looked to see what had happened, he saw a familiar sight, the Science Department members wrestling with Komui over his device. He knew this wouldn't end well.

“Now Allen! Destroy that thing!” shouted Reever as he and the others shuffled with Komui.

Allen readied his Cross as he leapt at the Komourin, but before he was able to strike the machine, Komui shouted, “Komourin! Innocence Armor Activate!”

The Komourin withdrew its weaponry and the red in its armor plating began to glow as it quickly surrounded the rest of the machine. Allen's Arm struck the machine with earth-shattering power, and yet it stood there unscathed. After multiple attacks, it had still looked as though nothing had touched it. Allen then jumped back quite a distance as his Cross Arm transformed into the Cross Gun.

Back in the courtyard, Allen aimed his Cross Gun at Komourin and fired as much as he could, hoping to pierce the incredible armor of the machine.

As he did this, Allen heard another shout from Komui, “Komourin! Activate the Anti-Matter Cannon!”

Another whir from the machine stirred as its armor stopped glowing. Once more a weapon emerged from the machine, but this time, it was a giant cannon barrel. The tip of the barrel glowed dark as a ball of blackness grew from it as Allen fired his weapon. All of the shots from his Cross Gun seemed to redirect into the cannon's tip. Allen tried to stop when he saw his shots ineffective, but the weapon continued to fire at full-power, forced by the Anti-Matter Cannon. Allen, weakened from the amount of energy he had used for the attack, fell to the ground. Then the Anti-Matter Cannon opened fire upon the now collapsed Allen, releasing all of the shots it had just absorbed at once in a fiery blast. Allen was too weak to dodge the wall of shining gunshots, and disappeared in a cloud of smoke from the impact.

When the smoke cleared, Lavi's giant hammer was all that could be seen. Apparently Lavi had used his hammer as a shield at the last second to save Allen.

“Decided to have a party without me?” questioned Lavi playfully as he smiled at Allen.

“I was in the town nearby when I heard all of the ruckus. I came by to see what was happening, but didn't expect to see this,” spoke Lavi, referring to the Komourin, “I remember Komui's Komourin robots, but they’ve never been this much trouble before.”

Meanwhile, Komui's device had been taken off by Reever, and yet Komui was still smiling as though he had accomplished something.

“We have his remote! Lavi, finish it!” shouted Reever as he broke the device.

“My pleasure!” replied Lavi as he raised the giant hammer into the air, “Size Shifting Hammer! Grow! Grow! Grow!”

“Komourin! Activate Shrink Beam!” shouted Komui.

As he did this, another weapon popped out of the machine, this time out of its head, just above the sensor. It shot out a beam of green light that hit the hammer and made it decrease in size.

“Grow! Grow! Grow!” shouted a frustrated Lavi, continuing to try to increase the hammer's size despite the fact that it was shrinking at a much faster rate.

Eventually, the Hammer couldn't grow anymore even though Lavi was pleading for it to keep growing. It continued to shrink in this manner until its size could be compared to an action figure’s weapon. Lavi was exhausted, as he too had put all of his power into his Hammer. He had just enough energy to keep it activated, because if he didn’t, the weapon might disappear altogether.

“Ha-ha-ha-ha!” laughed a maniacal Komui “Komourin is voice-activated by me! That remote was just to communicate with it from space! Komourin! Smite the Evil One!”

The Komourin machine started up again, preparing its weaponry as Lavi helped Allen up.

“We gotta get out outta here.” spoke Lavi as tried to run with Allen.

All of a sudden, a shout from above echoed through the courtyard.

“Illusionary Beast Technique” shouted Kanda as the creatures formed from Mugen.

The Creatures seemed to dance as they darted toward the machine, while Kanda landed in front of Lavi and Allen.

“Komourin! Activate Sonic Disrupter!” shouted Komui.

The machine obeyed as another weapon appeared, aimed at the creatures. Supersonic waves burst from the new gun, making the illusions disappear. It also sent a high-pitched sound into the air, forcing everyone within hearing distance to clasp their hands over their ears. Kanda did this at first too, but then took his sword and slowly made his way toward the Komourin robot, trying to ignore the pain from his ears. It, however, was too much for him to handle, so he collapsed to the ground, just a few meters from the base of it. His Mugen deactivated, as did the Sonic Disrupter. Everyone's ears were in pain and still ringing as everyone looked at the machine as well as Komui, who had apparently been prepared, wearing earmuffs.

“Komourin! Self-Command Mode!” Shouted Komui as the machine seemed to whir in acknowledgment.

The machine scanned everything around it, and then formed the Innocence Armor around itself just as Lenalee jumped from the highest point of the castle, using her Black Boots to slam down upon the Komourin. The machine took the impact, but had braced it legs into the ground, forcing all of the damage into the earth itself. This caused shockwaves to spread from its base as the ground became cracked in all directions, forcing anyone standing on the ground to fall down. Lenalee then kicked the machine on its side, but it seemed as though nothing could harm its armor.

Reever then had an idea and said “Stop that thing Komui, or it'll hurt Lenalee!”

Komui laughed and responded, “Impossible. It’s programmed to protect her and would never harm her.”

Meanwhile, Lenalee's attacks continue to be useless. Then she noticed where the sensor was and figured that its weak point would be there. She leapt onto the machine and was about to attack its head, when a puff of gas consumed her, forcing her into a state of sleep. The Komourin then removed its armor, and a mechanical hand took her and placed her at Kamoui’s feet. It then faced Allen again as the other members of the Science Department was trying to wake up Allen, Lavi, and Kanda by splashing them with buckets of water.

“Get out of there!” shouted Komui “Komourin S cannot be stopped! He is perfect! If you stay there, he'll kill you as well!”

Just as this happened, more Exorcists came out of the building prepared to fight the machine after hearing that some of their best were injured, but as they appeared the Komourin robot used one of its mechanical arms to grab one of the buckets of water the Science Department members held. It then proceeded to drink it through its sensor. Komui stood there dumbfounded, his jaw open as he started to twitch. The Komourin robot then began to whir like crazy before its base dropped to the ground. All of its limbs then became limp, just moments before its core reactor exploded, sending bits of metal pieces flying everywhere, leaving some debris, along with the piece of Innocence that had fueled its special armor.

“Komourin! No! I knew I should have fixed that bug.” shouted Komui before being tackled by a number of people and forced into a straight jacket.

He was then dragged away as he shouted for Lenalee and Komourin. Lenalee, Kanda, and Allen were brought to the infirmary to rest and heal, while Lavi was brought to the Science Laboratory to hopefully undo the damage done to his hammer by Komourin.

Meanwhile, Komui was dragged to a soundproof room in the underbelly of the castle where he would be locked up until he calmed down. This was necessary from time to time because of Komui’s habit of causing too much trouble.

“I’ll kill you ALLEN!” shouted Komui as he struggled to wrestle away from his captors.

Reever helped toss Komui into the room and shut the door.

“Come on guys, lets go enjoy our day off. After we clean up the mess Komui left.” spoke Reever to the others as he headed upstairs.

The others cheered in agreement about their day off, despite the fact they once again had to clean up after their boss. They then went back to the courtyard together to clear up the remains of Komourin S.

That night, everyone in the castle slept peacefully, all except Komui, who was still shouting death threats to Allen.



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PostSubject: Re: A Brother's Love - A Komui FanFic   A Brother's Love - A Komui FanFic EmptySat Jun 06, 2009 4:58 am

me: i'm not a lenaleexallen fan so i don't approve of the kissing but...great fanfic...
so like komui...
wait...he installed a device in lenalee...??!
komurin....shoot...whatever happened to him!
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PostSubject: Re: A Brother's Love - A Komui FanFic   A Brother's Love - A Komui FanFic EmptySat Jun 06, 2009 9:07 am

.....lol......thanks....

........yes he did....it was for her "protection" when she goes out on missions, so he can always find her if something happens during a mission......(but we all know the real reason why he does it.....heh)

(sorry for misspelling "Komurin", it was an error on my part........"Komourin" is supposed to be "Komurin")


......what a machine though, eh?.....who knows what other weapons it might have in there.....
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PostSubject: Re: A Brother's Love - A Komui FanFic   A Brother's Love - A Komui FanFic EmptySun Jun 07, 2009 5:19 am

Me: it's ok!
ok yhue, stay away from komui and komurin
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