Angel Doll

Angle Doll: Innocence in my vocal cords allows me to control the people I choose. The only people who can hear my song are the people I’m controlling.

cool. but for this to be apperoved I need more info...

My Innocence allows me to control the people I choose by singing a special song, but the only people who can hear my song are the people I’m controlling.

I hope that clarifies it. Sorry if it’s confusing.

I know I got that part, and it's not confusing.... it's just missing some small detail... Ie the type of song ( is it a real song or just one that's awesome and in your mind that you made.), what will happen to your character when she is controling people. Things like that would help us ( the people behind the computer) understand your character more. Also get my approvle

Oh, I get it sorry. Well the song is a lullaby kind of thing that I came up with, and when I'm controlling people I have to stand still. So if something attacks me I can’t dodge it. Basically from the time I start singing the song tell the time I end it, I’m detached from the world. I can’t move, I can’t hear the things around me, but I can see what’s going on as if I’m watching it from above. Unfortunately the people under my control will stay under my control until they complete the task of which I’m controlling them to do.

humm.. sounds good, but can you give more info? ( i know it's a bother but it helps, i had to do the same thing.) It's okay if you don't know everything about it if you are new to roleplaying :3

I don’t mind. So I can not only control people but I can control akuma to, but to do that it takes a lot more energy. That’s basically all it does, control things and makes me more vulnerable than I already am. If there’s more it can do then I don’t know about it yet, sorry.

that's completely fine :3
now we ( the masters behind the computer ) know that you can;t go on missions by your self like others, but then again you can't really rp by your self aether XD

Ha ha, that's true.

i didn't even think about other powers for my chara until last year XD and I've been her a long time

Oh I just remembered one thing, if I scream while I'm controlling people, all who I'm controlling will go insane. Its a little inconvenient.

humm..... how so?

Well, if some normal person walked by they would have the people I made go crazy locked up in an insane asylum, that kind of crazy.

ah, that kind..... hummm *evil smile*
hehe.... interesting

Ya, it's a little weird but oh well.

naww that fine it's also some what unique