D. Gray School: Chapter 1

Hello!! İ’m writing a fanfiction or doushinji or whatever this is called! This is my first time and, i’m actually just trying this format for the original story i’m gonna make...this is the format i want to use so i want to try it out on this first!!!
This story is sort of finished (in my mind) already but...i just won’t post all of it now...it’s too long!!
İ can take a few suggestions (if anyone’s interested) like..i want a school festival...or something like that but not all suggestions will be accepted because the story’s flow and end is sort of fixed....

PS: in here, Allen and everyone in his class (including Lenalee) has the same age... some character’s characteristics may have been twisted a bit (like lavi’s over cheeriness) but most informations (like their hobbies, how they react towards each other, what they like and or hate) will not be changed but hoe they’re connected (by family, master to apprentice) will also be changed.

~Aeriuu

D. Gray School
Chapter 1: My New School

I’m starting school today. Me and my uncle just transferred here, because of his new job. [sigh] i always get dragged whenever he gets moved by his boss...Oh yeah...i forgot to introduce myself. My name is Allen Walker. I’m a freshman.

Allen: Uncle Cross! I’m leaving
Cross: Yeah yeah...
Allen: Oh yeah, any news from father?
Cross: Mana?...hmmm no...i haven’t received anything... hey! You’re going to be late! Don’t waste the money i’m paying that school!!
Allen: OK! Shoot i’m going to be late!

Day 1: Today’s my first day...

Allen: hmmm...class 1-5
Reever : you must be Allen Walker...
*Reever smiles*
I’m Mr. Reever. İ’m gonna be your teacher and adviser
Allen: oh...it’s very nice to meet you, sir
Reever : Shall we go in then?
*Reever enters room with Allen*
OK! Everybody shut up! This is your new classmate Allen Walker. Don’t act strange around him just because he transferred here in the middle of first semester!

Weird teacher...

Reever : Okay Allen, you can sit there beside Kanda
*Reever points at empty seat beside a long haired person*
Allen: *walks to empty seat beside long haired person and sits down*
*looks at Kanda*
(Hi! I’m Allen...nice to meet you)
Kanda: Che!!
Allen: *stunned*

**During break**
So far things aren’t going so well....i even have to sit with a complete jerk like him...what was his name...Kanda was it? [sigh] i think i like being home schooled better...but Uncle Cross has to’save’ more so he’s sending me to this school... so far...i hate everything...

Lavi: Yo! My name is Lavi! Nice to meet you!
Allen: Oh...thank you. İ’m Allen
Lavi: So why’d you transfer in the middle of first term?
Kanda: İt’s a bit rude to ask that question stupid rabbit
*stands up*
Lavi: My aren’t we grumpy today??
Kanda: Shut up!
Lavi: *approches Kanda*
This is Yuu by the way...
*pinches cheek*
Say ‘hi’ Yuu...you should be nice to your new seatmate!!
Kanda: Don’t touch me!
*takes lavi’s hands off*
İ’m going!

0_0...People here are weird....

Lavi: Hehe...
Allen: Wait, i thought his name was Kanda
Lavi: No...that’s his last name... he hates being called Yuu

He’s the only one who has the courage to call him Yuu...

Lavi: Try it sometimes! You’ll see different reactions!!
*smiles*

No way! He’ll kill me!!

Allen: o-ok...

**After school**
Allen: [sigh] that was one strange first day...
???: Hey Allen!!
*running*
Allen: *looks back*
Oh Lavi
*gets tackled*
Lavi: Where are you going?
Allen: ~Get off me!
*stands up*
[pant..pant] what’s wrong with you?!
Lavi: so...where are you going?

So he’s not listening...

Allen: Home...why?
Lavi: Home?!
~Goody two shoes....
Wanna hang out???
Kanda: *walks by...*
Lavi: *grabs Kanda*
Wanna go to Yuu’s place?

Huh? Never!! Like i’d go to that bastard’s house!

Kanda: Stupid rabbit!
*squirms* ~Let go of me!!
Go to my house??? Who said that you can go to my house? And as if i’ll let that beansprout in my house!

Beansprout?

Allen: Beansprout? Why you-!
Lavi: So, wanna come?
~Stop squirming Yuu
Allen: No thanks... i still have to help out at home...and i have a part time job too
Lavi: You’re no fun!

Am i suppose to be not offended?

Lavi: Well, i guess it can’t be helped...join us the next time ok? Let’s go Yuu! We’re gonna have some fun tonight!
Kanda: Let go of me stupid!
Lavi: *ignores Kanda*
Hmm...what do you think we should do first.... go to the arcade? Board games?? movie trip??
Kanda: İ said let go!
Lavi: Com’on help me out here!! İ can’t decide!!

**at home**

Allen: İ’m home...
*walks inside*
So...uncle isn’t here yet...
*looks in the fridge*
[sweat drop] eh....he didn’t leave anything to eat...again...

İ’m starving.....

Allen: *sees mail lying on the table*
Bills, bills, bills....
Debts, debts, debts....oh...a note

“ i went out today, my salary just came in....i left some money under the microwave pay those bills ok? İ think i didn’t leave enough so just get some from your allowance and pay them ok? –Uncle Cross”

Allen: İ have an allowance? İ work part time to save up some money! You never gave me any allowance! Stupid uncle!!

“P.S.: your father just sent in a letter for you. İt’s with the money...don’t worry...i didn’t read it.”

Allen: *looks under the microwave*
There it is...and so is the money

[on the envelope]
“Allen, do not open this letter yet. İ want you to read this on your birthday ok?”

Allen: On my birthday?....but...but...but....
Aah! Fine! İf you say so Father!
İ guess i have to pay these....
Why is everyone acting so weird!! Am i the only one normal left!! Aaaah!!!

So far everything’s turning for the worse. My family’s acting strange and i’m stuck with a jerk at school
Yuu Kanda- weird, silent, JERK, MEAN
Lavi (dunno his last name yet though)- weird, “brave”, annoying....he’s friends with Kanda...and so far, the friendliest person in school....
Mr. Reever-.....
That’s what i found out so far....


shoot...this took a lot of editing!!!

Me: so guys? how'd you like the story so far?
Allen: mkay....but why am i and Master related? and what was in Mana's letter??
Me: just wait ok?
Lavi: am i really like that?
Me: didn't you see what i first said?
Lenalee: well you tend to be... i'm not there
Me: It's the first chapter
Kanda: *doesn't care*
Yhue: *no comment*

Ooh~! ;DD

Imma same grade as Allen! Finally! >:I

*jams out to Hey Jude*

... *dances/flails* I liked the story! I should really upload some of my stories. >w>"
It's interesting that Reever is the teacher, and Cross is his uncle. I was thinking more Cross = sensei and ... I dunno for his guardian. o:

MANA LIVES. DDDDDD< !!

*goes along with the setup you have* ~~

Kaele: I loved it! ;w;
*clings to Allen's face* C:
Allen: ... *is used to Kaele doing this, but wonders 'why now?'*

.....here's an idea.....maybe Komui should be the principle......and he could have a little "chat" after school about his "behavioral problems" when Allen talks to Lenalee on one of his first times......

....essentially it would be a "Stay away from my Lenalee or I'm sending a letter home to your guardian about your behavior!" sort of conversation........and considering Cross is taking care of Allen, it would be interesting to see that played out......especially if Lenalee likes Allen in this thing....heh....

To: Ms. Nakamura
me: thankies!!!


To: Lune-san
Me: yeah... i thought of that too...
but i made komui the school doctor!!!

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OMG

....that means that if Allen even gets a scrape *pictures Komui getting out the drill* .......I don't envy him....


I just have one question........if Allen gets into a fight, will he be able to use his Innocence?....

Me:i think there would be no innocence stuff here..
(sorry!!)
it's in the present time setting...
no fictiony stuff....

Yhue: ....

....there's nothing to apologize for............I was just curious since his arm is his Innocence in the series.....thats all.....

Me: *smiles* ok!
Yhue: can i go now?
Me: ......

Bwah hah hah. :\
I'm replying for no reason.

Komui, remember: BAND AIDS, NOT DRILLS. D<

don't forget the giant syringe!

....hmm?.....does that mean Komurin is the school mascot?.....

*hears chanting of the football team, the "Giant Robots" *

...I guess thats a yes.....

Giant robots, hm? o:

By the way, that is a little cosplay Komurin I found on dA. xD

...aww...thats cute....

Masque De La Lune wrote:

....hmm?.....does that mean Komurin is the school mascot?.....

*hears chanting of the football team, the "Giant Robots" *

...I guess thats a yes.....

hmmm....cool, but he will be there....
komui doesn't manage the school but i think that's a good idea!!
maybe i should consider it but...i want them to be 'the exorcists'!!

and so far...i only made a baseball team....

super sorry...i think that i'm not living with anyone's expectations here...!

Yhue Nightroad wrote:

Masque De La Lune wrote:

....hmm?.....does that mean Komurin is the school mascot?.....

*hears chanting of the football team, the "Giant Robots" *

...I guess thats a yes.....

hmmm....cool, but he will be there....
komui doesn't manage the school but i think that's a good idea!!
maybe i should consider it but...i want them to be 'the exorcists'!!

and so far...i only made a baseball team....

super sorry...i think that i'm not living with anyone's expectations here...!

....don't be sorry..........your doing just fine......(if anything we should apologize for messing with your concept)

.......its just entertaining coming up with ideas......lol.....

.....speaking of which, will Jerry have to wair a hairnet as a lunchlady?....lol....

It is cute, isn't it? 8D
I wish I had a little Komurin. ;o;

I don't really have any expectations, I'm just going with the flow! ;D
Whatever you write is fine with me. :3
And, yeah, I agree with Masque. We shouldn't have messed with the idea, but it was interesting to think about. o:

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL. HAIRNETS.

i appreciate the suggestions, really i do!!

hmmm...
LOL...jerry with a hairnet..

That's great! ;D

LOLOL. I wonder if he would put condoms on his pigtail things instead of nets? 8D

(( ... Kaele... o- o ))

condoms? what that?

...umm....why would Jerry use condoms for that?....

( http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Condom )

Uh... Yhue... ಠ___ಠ
*GIGGLE* C:

I dunno, why wouldn't he? >w<
He enjoys cute little boys, so he must have them on hand.

.....as true as trhat might be, he'd be saving them for use, not wearing them on his hair.....

Eh, who knows, he might get a boner from Allen messing with his condom'd hair or something.

....I can picture something else....

*Allen has been eating in the Cafeteria when all of a sudden he bited something chewy and spits it out, revealing a now chewed up condom. Lavi starts cracking up and yells it at everyone. Kanda is stunned and says that Allen should watch what he shoves into his mouth, which starts another uproar. Meanwhile, in the kitchen, Jerry realizes one of his *ahem* hairnets are missing.*