Kaele // 卡埃莱 Noah Slayer
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| Subject: Re: D. Gray School: Chapter 1 Fri Jun 26, 2009 11:02 pm | |
| LOLOLOLOL. You come up with the best stories, Masque! "Baka Moyashi, watch what you shove in your mouth." ~ K "ROFLZ. Oh, Yuu!" ~ L "... A condom, seriously..?" ~ A "... Allen put my condom in his mouth.. *nosebleed/boner* ... " ~ J | |
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Masque De La Lune Noah Slayer
Posts : 1080 Join date : 2009-05-28 Age : 36 Location : ....everywhere and nowhere.....I'm in the corner of your mind.....
| Subject: Re: D. Gray School: Chapter 1 Fri Jun 26, 2009 11:18 pm | |
| ....lol...thanks.... (but Jerry wouldn't realize it at first, but I could picture a principle and some parents being involved.....lmao) | |
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Kaele // 卡埃莱 Noah Slayer
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| Subject: Re: D. Gray School: Chapter 1 Fri Jun 26, 2009 11:26 pm | |
| Parents? o:
I think the only people who would be concerned would be Allen and Komui. >w>
But Jerry might go to jail. Dx | |
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Yhue Nightroad Excorcist
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| Subject: Re: D. Gray School: Chapter 1 Sun Jun 28, 2009 9:05 am | |
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Kaele // 卡埃莱 Noah Slayer
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| Subject: Re: D. Gray School: Chapter 1 Thu Jul 09, 2009 8:36 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: D. Gray School: Chapter 1 Wed Dec 23, 2009 8:27 am | |
| - Yhue Nightroad wrote:
- Hello!! İ’m writing a fanfiction or doushinji or whatever this is called! This is my first time and, i’m actually just trying this format for the original story i’m gonna make...this is the format i want to use so i want to try it out on this first!!!
This story is sort of finished (in my mind) already but...i just won’t post all of it now...it’s too long!! İ can take a few suggestions (if anyone’s interested) like..i want a school festival...or something like that but not all suggestions will be accepted because the story’s flow and end is sort of fixed....
PS: in here, Allen and everyone in his class (including Lenalee) has the same age... some character’s characteristics may have been twisted a bit (like lavi’s over cheeriness) but most informations (like their hobbies, how they react towards each other, what they like and or hate) will not be changed but hoe they’re connected (by family, master to apprentice) will also be changed. ~Aeriuu
D. Gray School Chapter 1: My New School
I’m starting school today. Me and my uncle just transferred here, because of his new job. [sigh] i always get dragged whenever he gets moved by his boss...Oh yeah...i forgot to introduce myself. My name is Allen Walker. I’m a freshman.
Allen: Uncle Cross! I’m leaving Cross: Yeah yeah... Allen: Oh yeah, any news from father? Cross: Mana?...hmmm no...i haven’t received anything... hey! You’re going to be late! Don’t waste the money i’m paying that school!! Allen: OK! Shoot i’m going to be late!
Day 1: Today’s my first day...
Allen: hmmm...class 1-5 Reever : you must be Allen Walker... *Reever smiles* I’m Mr. Reever. İ’m gonna be your teacher and adviser Allen: oh...it’s very nice to meet you, sir Reever : Shall we go in then? *Reever enters room with Allen* OK! Everybody shut up! This is your new classmate Allen Walker. Don’t act strange around him just because he transferred here in the middle of first semester!
Weird teacher...
Reever : Okay Allen, you can sit there beside Kanda *Reever points at empty seat beside a long haired person* Allen: *walks to empty seat beside long haired person and sits down* *looks at Kanda* (Hi! I’m Allen...nice to meet you) Kanda: Che!! Allen: *stunned*
**During break** So far things aren’t going so well....i even have to sit with a complete jerk like him...what was his name...Kanda was it? [sigh] i think i like being home schooled better...but Uncle Cross has to’save’ more so he’s sending me to this school... so far...i hate everything...
Lavi: Yo! My name is Lavi! Nice to meet you! Allen: Oh...thank you. İ’m Allen Lavi: So why’d you transfer in the middle of first term? Kanda: İt’s a bit rude to ask that question stupid rabbit *stands up* Lavi: My aren’t we grumpy today?? Kanda: Shut up! Lavi: *approches Kanda* This is Yuu by the way... *pinches cheek* Say ‘hi’ Yuu...you should be nice to your new seatmate!! Kanda: Don’t touch me! *takes lavi’s hands off* İ’m going!
0_0...People here are weird....
Lavi: Hehe... Allen: Wait, i thought his name was Kanda Lavi: No...that’s his last name... he hates being called Yuu
He’s the only one who has the courage to call him Yuu...
Lavi: Try it sometimes! You’ll see different reactions!! *smiles*
No way! He’ll kill me!!
Allen: o-ok...
**After school** Allen: [sigh] that was one strange first day... ???: Hey Allen!! *running* Allen: *looks back* Oh Lavi *gets tackled* Lavi: Where are you going? Allen: ~Get off me! *stands up* [pant..pant] what’s wrong with you?! Lavi: so...where are you going?
So he’s not listening...
Allen: Home...why? Lavi: Home?! ~Goody two shoes.... Wanna hang out??? Kanda: *walks by...* Lavi: *grabs Kanda* Wanna go to Yuu’s place?
Huh? Never!! Like i’d go to that bastard’s house!
Kanda: Stupid rabbit! *squirms* ~Let go of me!! Go to my house??? Who said that you can go to my house? And as if i’ll let that beansprout in my house!
Beansprout?
Allen: Beansprout? Why you-! Lavi: So, wanna come? ~Stop squirming Yuu Allen: No thanks... i still have to help out at home...and i have a part time job too Lavi: You’re no fun!
Am i suppose to be not offended?
Lavi: Well, i guess it can’t be helped...join us the next time ok? Let’s go Yuu! We’re gonna have some fun tonight! Kanda: Let go of me stupid! Lavi: *ignores Kanda* Hmm...what do you think we should do first.... go to the arcade? Board games?? movie trip?? Kanda: İ said let go! Lavi: Com’on help me out here!! İ can’t decide!!
**at home**
Allen: İ’m home... *walks inside* So...uncle isn’t here yet... *looks in the fridge* [sweat drop] eh....he didn’t leave anything to eat...again...
İ’m starving.....
Allen: *sees mail lying on the table* Bills, bills, bills.... Debts, debts, debts....oh...a note
“ i went out today, my salary just came in....i left some money under the microwave pay those bills ok? İ think i didn’t leave enough so just get some from your allowance and pay them ok? –Uncle Cross”
Allen: İ have an allowance? İ work part time to save up some money! You never gave me any allowance! Stupid uncle!!
“P.S.: your father just sent in a letter for you. İt’s with the money...don’t worry...i didn’t read it.”
Allen: *looks under the microwave* There it is...and so is the money
[on the envelope] “Allen, do not open this letter yet. İ want you to read this on your birthday ok?”
Allen: On my birthday?....but...but...but.... Aah! Fine! İf you say so Father! İ guess i have to pay these.... Why is everyone acting so weird!! Am i the only one normal left!! Aaaah!!!
So far everything’s turning for the worse. My family’s acting strange and i’m stuck with a jerk at school Yuu Kanda- weird, silent, JERK, MEAN Lavi (dunno his last name yet though)- weird, “brave”, annoying....he’s friends with Kanda...and so far, the friendliest person in school.... Mr. Reever-..... That’s what i found out so far....
shoot...this took a lot of editing!!!
Me: so guys? how'd you like the story so far? Allen: mkay....but why am i and Master related? and what was in Mana's letter?? Me: just wait ok? Lavi: am i really like that? Me: didn't you see what i first said? Lenalee: well you tend to be... i'm not there Me: It's the first chapter Kanda: *doesn't care* Yhue: *no comment* Who's Reever? |
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Masque De La Lune Noah Slayer
Posts : 1080 Join date : 2009-05-28 Age : 36 Location : ....everywhere and nowhere.....I'm in the corner of your mind.....
| Subject: Re: D. Gray School: Chapter 1 Wed Dec 23, 2009 7:12 pm | |
| .... Who is Reever?! You have to be kidding me. He's one of the main scientists. Komui is always talking to him about stuff. *goes to google to get a picture* | |
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